Creative Much?

+So I asked my P6 kids to write a piece of "creative writing". We've been studying Harry Potter, and this was like their assignment after the first chapter! This one rocks. I'm in it.

+Esther Chan was walking home in a cold dark night. She turned into a small alley - the part she hated the most. Suddenly, Zhong Ru appeared. He grabbed her handbag and took her wallet. He tried to run away but it was too late. Esther Chan changed into her real form, a mutant, and it was Storm, a member of X-Men. She used lightning to stop Zhong Ru from running away. Then, the most astonishing thing happened. Zhong Ru also changed into his true form, the Human Torch. His flames was so bright that it even changed the night into a hot, bright morning. They started their battle at the moment and it lasted for months. The Human Torch and Storm had to use their signature move. For the Human Torch, he used "Tornado Flame" and Storm used "Tornado Lightning". They used their tornadoes at the same moment and it collided. "KA-BOOM!" The tornadoes had been destroyed. Storm tried to use her moves again but her powers had been destroyed together with the tornadoes. However, the Human Torch's powers were still with him ad said,"Surrender, you fat pig, or you will pay for the destruction of the city!" Storm changed back into Esther Chan and took a white flag from her handbag to prove she was surrendering. The Fantastic Four group then took Esther Chan to jail. The city remained peaceful and calm.

+What can I say? EPIC. Although, it might be interesting to note that the Human Torch actually tried to rob Storm, but Storm was sent to prison. LOL